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Story: Toranilor and the Upari Crystal

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Post  Toranilor Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:02 pm

Hey guys,

I've finally finished my first fan-fic detailing the development of Toran's character. I plan to do three more, and any comments/suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

Toranilor and the Upari Crystal

Feel free to criticise, any comment will be recieved with open arms!

Oh, and dont edit it. Please.
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Post  Kevlar Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:57 am

I've read the story, it's good work Tor! =D Can't wait till the next short story.
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